And so, my dear Rancourtesans, I'm taking a break from my blog vacation (blogcation?) to introduce you to another of the fabulous writers whom I've met through Black Opal Books. Christine Hughes is gearing up for the big release of her first novel, TORN, and I'm pleased to have her here to talk about writing for young adults. Keep reading, cuz you'll see there's a sneak peek at TORN down below, and it looks awesome. Thanks so much, Christine, and all the best with your release.
Peace,
Liv
Thank you for having me on your blog! I am very happy to be
here.
When I was writing TORN, I had to remember my protagonist,
Samantha, was not an adult. Sure, she was experiencing adult situations and
adult emotions but she was 17. The reactions and mannerisms of a 17 year-old,
no matter how mature, are going to be very different from the reactions and
mannerisms of someone five, ten or fifteen years older.
As much as I wanted her to be able to hold a conversation
with the vocabulary of the kids from Dawson's Creek, I wanted her to be real.
Don't get me wrong, I've met students with high level vocabulary but there is
something jaded about using words for the sake of using them. And I wanted
Samantha to be regular teenage girl with regular teenage girl issues and
doubts. It was bad enough I was dropping fate on her shoulders, I did the best
I could to make her as real as possible.
I was an English major in college and was a middle school
English teacher for some time so I’m no stranger to the phenomenon that is
Young Adult Literature. YA is like this thing, this creature that infiltrates
the minds of young men and women, occasionally crosses over into grown-up land
and opens up worlds.
When I decided to write, no question – my first book was
going to be YA. I loved crafting my characters to fit the idiosyncrasies of the
intended audience. I knew the message in the pages would need to rise to the
level of a thought provoking, conversation starter and I truly hope I’ve been
able to do just that. Only time will tell, of course. With that said, writing
YA is not easy. It’s hard to forget sometimes that teens aren’t snarky for the
sake of being snarky. It’s hard to remember that Mean Girls is just a movie.
It’s hard to process that these kids discuss adult issues, deal with adult
problems and unfortunately have to grow up faster than I remember having to.
The point is, my two cents on writing YA is this – remember
these kids are so much different than when many of us grew up. They know more,
they see more and they expect more from a book that “happily ever after”. They
want variety. If you can give them something to think about, something to talk
about and something to share, they’ll read your book and pass it along to their
friends.
TORN
will be released June 9, 2012 and is currently available for pre-order at Black Opal Books.
Bio: A former Army brat, Christine Hughes
moved quite often. She spent much of her time losing herself in books and
creating stories about many of the people she'd met. Falling in love with
literature was easy for her and she majored in English while attending college
in New Jersey.
Not sure where her love of reading and
writing fit, she became a middle school English teacher. After nine years of
teaching others to appreciate literature, she decided to take the plunge and
write her first novel. Now at home focusing on making writing her new career,
she spends her time creating characters and plot points instead of grading
papers.
Music has become an integral part of her writing process and without the
proper play list, Hughes finds the words don't flow. At least a few times a
week she can be found at the local Barnes & Noble with her Mac and
headphones working on her next novel.
Torn Blurb:
With the sudden, mysterious death of her
father, Samantha discovers her life isn’t what it seems. Not only isn’t she the
normal teenage girl she thought she was, Sam must now take her father’s place
in the fight between two groups of fallen angels—the Faithful and the Exiled—in
a race to save humanity. In addition to dealing with the devastating betrayal
of her friend and her feelings for someone she is forbidden to love, Sam must
also fight the growing darkness within her as she struggles to make a choice
between fighting alongside the Faithful or succumbing to the temptation of the
Exiled. Both sides require sacrifices Sam isn’t sure she can make.
Chapter 1
September
The Cabin
Run, Samantha. Don’t look back. Just
run.
I
repeated this mantra over and over again as I sprinted through the trees.
Focused, like my life depended on it and knowing that one day it would, I ran.
Through the damp woods, past branches that tore at my skin, and hurdling over logs,
I ran. My breath mingled with the crisp fall air but I didn’t feel the cold. I
felt nothing but the pure and relentless adrenaline that pumped through my
veins. As the sun rose and cast its broken beams through the trees, I ran. With
only a single thought: I have to get there.
I
knew he was following me. He was close. So close. I couldn’t let him catch me.
My
legs carried me over slick moss and rotting bark. I flew over downed trees,
grabbing for branches to help me over. I was fast. Faster than before. Faster
than yesterday. My focus was singular. The task at hand was all I could think
about. Get through, Sam. Faster, Sam.
Jump, Sam.
I
swore I could navigate those woods with my eyes closed. I could see the next
obstacle that lay ahead of me yards before it came into view. And when I
concentrated hard enough, those obstacles began to disappear.
I
burst into the clearing and could faintly make out his barely labored breathing
behind me. He was so close I could smell him. I dug in and pumped my legs
faster. Always faster. I knew I was going to beat him this time. I had to. I
closed in on my destination. All I had to do was jump. I had to make it over
the water. Over the creek on the other side of the clearing.
Samannnnnnthaaaa…. Run!
The
intrusive voice pulsed through me and drowned out the mantra in my head,
breaking my rhythm and I stumbled over a rock I was sure hadn’t been there
yesterday.
Damn it!
The eerily familiar voice that had settled comfortably in my head like a
squatter, had the worst timing It teased like a schoolyard bully and I wanted
to scream. But I couldn’t. I had to run. I was almost there. Come on, Sam. Fifty feet. Forty feet.
Thirty feet. Almost there. As I braced
my body for the jump over the swollen creek, he caught my ankles in mid-air and
dropped me to the ground with a bone jarring tackle onto the muddy bank.
“Son
of a bitch,” I growled.
I
fought back, jumping up the way I was taught, fists at the ready. I caught him
off guard, for the first time, with a jab to the chin and a roundhouse to the stomach.
Then I did a back spring, landing well out of his reach and quickly regrouped. The
grin on his face as he rubbed his chin told me I surprised him with that one.
And now I was in trouble.
“Lucky
shot, Sam. Nice kick. Too bad this one’s on me.” His cocky bravado triggered an
extra jolt of adrenaline inside me. He’s not gonna take this round. Not this
time.
For
a few seconds we circled each other, anticipating the other’s next move. He
crouched and lunged at my knees. I jumped to grab the branch above me and he
missed, sprawling out in the dirt. But not for long. He was on his feet again before
I’d even let go of the tree, his eyes merely blue slits of predatory focus. I
had a total of three seconds to figure out my next move before he lunged again,
targeting me mid-waist.
Instinctively,
I dropped to the ground, and sprung forward, drilling him into the trunk of the
nearest tree. Rain had started to fall, shrouding the sound of my movements as I
quickly disappeared behind the brush. I needed to work out how to nail him with
an element of surprise.
He
growled in frustration but his annoyance didn’t matter. I was winning. I could
feel it.
My
hands and knees were scraped and dirty. My hair was a tangled mess and the
sudden rise in humidity brought on by the rain wasn’t helping. The scent of
decaying vegetation around me did nothing to mask the stench of my sweat.
His
voice taunted me. “Come out, come out wherever you are. You can’t hide from me
forever. You think you can camouflage yourself from me? I can smell you.”
Think, Samantha.
He
was right. I couldn’t sit there all day getting soaked in the rain waiting for
him to find me. Through a small gap between the leaves, I could see him
looking, scanning the trees and underbrush. Then his eyes focused where I
crouched. I needed to act, now.
The
forces of nature seemed to heed my need for action and the sky erupted,
complete with booming thunder and darting strikes of lightning. I belly crawled
behind bushes until I was on his right. His eyes still boring into the spot I’d
just vacated, he took a step forward.
I
slowly stood and crept up next to him. He turned around and I caught his cheek
with a right hook but he grabbed my hair and yanked my head back. I yelled, in surprise
and pain. The look on his face made him
almost unrecognizable and for a moment I was paralyzed as the maniacal voice
stole through me once again.
Samannnnnnthaaaa… Run!
He
took advantage of my shock and swept my legs out, dropping me face first into a
vat of mud.
So
not how I had envisioned this ending.
