tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9152710377778718003.post1005268285909733907..comments2023-10-25T08:47:36.436-07:00Comments on L: Aloha, Baby (A Short Story Serial - Part 5)Liv Rancourthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13171029958375171223noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9152710377778718003.post-72026910998130900052015-03-20T11:55:49.314-07:002015-03-20T11:55:49.314-07:00See, but Jack's essentially a creep and a bit ...See, but Jack's essentially a creep and a bit of a bully. He's not man enough to stand up for a woman when he wants her. <br /><br />Sorry you missed out on the dance battle, though. ;)Liv Rancourthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13171029958375171223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9152710377778718003.post-37763162857124313182015-03-20T11:31:48.772-07:002015-03-20T11:31:48.772-07:00I was kinda expecting Jack and Dan to resolve thei...I was kinda expecting Jack and Dan to resolve their differences with a ferocious dance battle, but Jack clearly showed himself to be the more powerful of the two ;)<br /><br />Nicely written, Liv.Mike Schulenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07150989011176710430noreply@blogger.com